martes, 3 de febrero de 2009

Writing Paragraphs

Student Name________________ Date________________
Mrs. Chinea

Writing Paragraph Exam



Directions: Using the blog prepared by the teacher write paragraphs assigned. Write three paragraphs with at least five to six sentences each one of them.



Theme: What would you like to study after graduate from high school?



Guide Questions: What do you want to study after your graduation in May ? Why?


Mention your short and long terms goals?

Where do you want to study? Why?

Whst are the three carrers you most like ? Explain your objectives for each career ?



Evaluation: Using a rubric paragraph evaluation teacher will correct organization, content, spelling and neatness. This work has a value of 16 points.






Good Luck!

37 comentarios:

  1. What I would like to study after I graduate from highschool has to do a lot with my ability of being able to speak and understand two languages very well. To begin with my desire growing up was to be able to work with crime scene investigation. As soon as I entered high school I noticed that life is hard and there is no time to waste. This led me to view that studying hospitality would be a big advantage for me. In these next paragraphs I would be glad to explain why my heart desired these two careers.

    As a crime scene investigator you have to be willing to do a lot things you never thought you would do. That was the least of my problems just because I would not mind being in such a situation. Having the advantage of being able to speak two languages would help me out a lot in this career. What i liked the most about studyin this is that i will be able to help out this world in one way by solving crimes. But having this as a career means you never stop studying. Let's say I decide to study this in a university, after that I still have to study many things once I find my job. I can not just finish studying and have my job. I have to keep studying for as long as I decide to have this career. I would prefer enjoying my job and feeling that going to a university was worth it. I don't want to feel like I didn't learn anything while I was in the university.

    This brings me to the reason why I would prefer studying hospitality. Once again my advantage is that I can speak two languages but in this career I can use that advantage a lot more. I find it interesting helping people that are tourist. The person that put this desire in my heart is my older brother. He has been working in booking tourist for over 3 years now and he enjoys his job. I like meeting new peolple and being able to see that my brother had that opportunity opened my eyes. Even if I have to push it to the limit I wil do it because I find that this career is something I will be able to enjoy as long as I work there.

    In conclusion, this really shows that once you enter highschool your thoughts and feelings really do change. My point is that i perfer studyine something I have a big advantage on and that I will be able to like at the same time.

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  2. How am I going to build MY FUTURE?


    When I graduate from high school know in May, my plans are to study Infirmary. I would like to study that because it’s been my lifelong dream. Since I was very small my grandma use to ask me what was I going to study? And I always told her Infirmary Grandma to take care of you. And when she got sick I use to take care of her so for me that was like a practice. Know that she is gone I feel like I owe her that.


    With this comes some goals and these are going to help me along the way. I don’t plan on having a house or a car right away but they are sure to come. I’m thinking that while I study I need to get a job. So that could help me pay for my profession and my own things. After I finish my studies I plan on having a house and a family of my own. I’ll be a professional and that’s when I’ll be prepared to confront on my own with life.

    I got in at UCB, it wasn’t what I planned but is good there. They tell me it’s quiet there and peaceful I saw its campus and that was what gave me that last push. It doesn’t have that much but it could work out for me. I know this is going to be different. But life is about changes, that I’ve learned along the way I guess it’s just another big step I’m willing to take .

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  7. Since I was a small always caught my attention and woke Ambulances in my taste for emergencies medicas.Por that I decided that when I grew up and out of fourth year Emergency Medical Technique would study, one that I like and that my dad taught us to love and sister medicina.El was Embalzamador enfermeriay that is studying the health care of mine is my greatest desire.


    In the short term I have outlined many goals for when you finish the fourth year, as for example, and first of all. After I graduated, I will start studying Emergency Medical Technique, get a job while studying to pay for my studies, and all need for it and lost everything I can.


    In the long run, After I graduated from Emergency Medical Technique, Getting loue work study, the best salary you can, learn all the new q out to be well prepared and do my job excellently and have my own family and realiazarme as woman and as a person and professional.


    Another three races that I like are Justcia Criminal, for that within the judicial structure, the forum is responsible for enforcing the law to prosecute those who penal.y incur delitos.Pediatria, For who specializes in health and in diseases of children from birth to adolescencia.Enfermeria, which includes care for people of all ages, families, groups or communities.

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  8. Name: Shellimar Pagan Date: 06/05/2012

    Mrs. Chinea

    Theme: What would you like to study after graduate from high school.


    My goals to do after my graduation is power study any career that interests me. Which ihave in mind and more my interests are: sonography
    pon i love the sonographer career because i can do several sonograms for differents things. i can do sonograms to my son and i can do sonograms to pregnant and i see what is the sex of the baby that her carry.Sonography is not just for pregnancy but also for other as bacteries in between other diseases. Pharmaceutical why learn about different i like medications with what we have and what are its effect.

    The cakes i like much as much as i will be making desserts biscuits and flans are my preference. Why i like much i can do . Basides that i would like to learn a different aser for various occasions deserts .Good of these three careers me the most of sonographer. if even intertes a in after me like sonography grab pastry for a course a different power to get to the greath sonography.

    In oder to achieve a great do sonographer i should be very special study english mind. In the computer as i have to write all the words in english because they are shorter. Learn to study and give my 100% why i want to be some one in life power and give you a better future be achived my son. Sonographer want a great power be used and a great success for my ym stand out.

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  14. Name: Eliut Rivera Matos Date: May 6, 2012
    Mrs. Chinea Group: 12-3

    Theme: What I want to accomplish after graduating from high school?

    When I graduate I would like to study fourth year in a branch of health or technology. I want to study in one of those two areas I'm good at helping people and repair is to my liking. I have a confusion between which to decide. Already received information and guidance, and so far I study computer science. It is a difficult challenge, but if I try hard I can do.

    My long term goals are: a) Consider a full career in the health area or technology, b) Getting a job, c) Gradually become independent until he can earn an income with which to live. I'm going to meet goals that I really want to show all those people who do not believe me that I can achieve what I set. The short-term objectives are: a) Obtaining a diploma in barbering, b) Buy a car power itself, c) Obtain a degree in electricity. These short term goals I would like to get them to having a salary with which to supply my needs. I am going to achieve my goals with much patience, perseverance and above all enjoying what I do.

    I would like to study in Bayamón UPR or Mayagüez UPR, because I think both are very prestigious universities. The three races that I like are: a) Professional baseball player, b) Doctor, c) Technical computers. My goal in the baseball is to sign professional baseball in the race, to be a specialist doctor and I want to achieve in some areas and computer technician to set up my own business. As I said before, I know this is very difficult but not impossible. I'm going to propose and I will accomplish God's favor. I go to my 100%, do you go to you? I encourage you to examine why today we are nothing without education. Being persistent is the key to success.

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  15. The goals of my life is to be a criminologist biologist. I want to be the best in the industry and each day more than me. The reason that the industry is so interested in me because he always studied and seen e. Argo is that I feel is in my blood one of the things I intrigue and motivate. I think it has somethin 'more than normal and that man needs to better our lives.
    Criminology is the most that is invading Our installment buyings life is what leaves us hardly sleep. Criminals are everywhere, and my challenge is to improve our country and world. Is to make streets safer and hacesibles and no fear every time you step outside your house. Our world is by digging and nesesitamos to be together and unite for a better world. This is one of the main things that motivates me that this is one of my main goals.
    Other things that I am motivated to study is the creation of video games to improve my martial arts and be a fighter. These are the other branches q motivates me to rest of criminology to biology or justice criminate these are things I have in my blood. And I think each of them meet all costs and not give up until I achieved what I set. Always remember that the only person who puts limits or walls is yourself what you set out make it. Of course provided you have faith and God on your side at all times remind you and the power of God and faith has no limits. Every Day is a better person and all you will do Strive never be selfish because everything bad is back.

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  16. Them: What would you like to study after you graduate from High Schoool?


    My name is Kimberly Pagan Martinez. After I graduate from high school I want to go to college and become a Register nurse. I would like to have a bachelors degree, this is my main goal in life. The reason why I'd like to be a nurse is because I love helping people and in a kind of way I will be saving someone's life everyday. Nurses are supposed to be taking care of people who aren't able to take care of themselves.This is why I would love to be that person who is willing to help them. I think this is an amazing career.


    When I go to college I want to get a part time job so I can be able to have money for transportation and also any materials I would need for school. After I graduate from college I'm planning on getting my job as soon as possible and be able to put on practice what I had learned in school. I want to start making credits to be able to have a car of my own and also a house of my own. By the time I'm 30 years old I want to be all set and ready to be able to have a family and have kids on a wealthy family and I won't be struggling economicly.


    If for any reason I wouldn't be able to become a nurse, there are two more careers I would like to study. They are Culinary Arts and Bussiness Management. The reason why these careers aren't my first choice is because Culinary arts I will be cooking everyday of my life whenever i get a family, so I will be choosing this as a Hobby. Bussiness Managment, I like it but it's not something I love. Unlike Nursing I love the fact that people will reconized me as a proffesional woman.

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